The prognosis is simple,
really,
its just that
This cycle is unwilling.
Relentless, endless
A hallucination...
of faultless existence.
We\'re the ones who are fooled.
Here we are,
We ride the tide
Like we have sailed it before
Only to keel over
When the waves ebb,
and we beach...
As ignorant as the shore.
Its our security,
this blank depression
What keeps us sane.
The diagnosis is fitting,
after all,
seemingly willing
to offer medication and sleep
even psychadelic dreams!
Nightmares?
They are our spaceless imagination.
What makes
Life hypothetical,
figurative
A self explanation of fool\'s pride.
We are the morons,
we fuel our own demise
with thoughtless incantation
prayers
and too many amens.
We\'re the ones who let our toes
wade in impatience
When all our bodies want
is to swim.














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"Our lives begin to end the day we become silent about things that matter."
- Martin Luther King, Jr.
niiice job
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The Inseperable Trio
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-Popping pills just to keep pretending, take some more but it's almost empty. Looking back at the ones I've gone through, I can stop anytime I want to.-
They are our spaceless imagination.
What makes
Life hypothetical,
figurative
A self explanation of fool's pride.
that was my favorite. oooh i just loved this and i love how you used the beach metaphore and all that. it was simply beautiful!! very nice work
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Shooting stars and daffodils
Are all nice things to see
Crimzon streams and razor blades
Bring us back to reality
really,
its just that
This cycle is unwilling.
I like that stanza a lot. You sound really intellectual, and confident. And also, this stanza made me laugh:
and we beach...
As ignorant as the shore.
It reminded me of, "The whale is beaching!"
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